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They say they never work

But we will let them know

It’s hard enough being alone

But it’s even harder without each other


Because, even though you’ve left my side

I can still hear you cry

Fear that brings all the doubts and lies

Forgive me please if I can’t show you my love from so far


Your heart and mine,

They’re fragile by the tides

We’re bleeding and bleeding

With nowhere to hide

We’ve got no home,

When we’re set so apart
For :iconmuffeli: who as for a "long-distance relationship" poem.

Hope you enjoyed it.
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:iconshaun-shau:
Shaun-shau Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This poem is amazingly touching and beautiful
keep up the literary magic!^^
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Will do :D!
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Shaun-shau Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
yay :iconkermityayplz:
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I love that icon! 
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ValiaWolfie Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This brings back some tough memories. owo" But that's a good thing. Long distance is really hard but it's worth it in the end. At least if you try hard enough to close the gap. And even if you don't. The fact that two people can feel so strongly for each other without the physical attributes of a relationship is amazing in itself.
Great job on this, though! x3
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, I know what you mean.

We learn from these things.

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ValiaWolfie Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Eeyup. o3o
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Muffeli Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014
That was beautiful.
And yes I like it very much~
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad!
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Muffeli Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014
I just can't stop to wonder how good you are at writing~
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