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Daydream of
Conversation I wish
I had
They speak of
Relationships of the past
That never carried on
I was forgotten all along
With everyone I befriended
Conversation I wish
I had
They speak of
Relationships of the past
That never carried on
I was forgotten all along
With everyone I befriended
Literature
Angels Never Die
Angels never die… Angels never die…
They’re always down to ride and fly when they’re by my side
Right or wrong they’ll hold me down till the day I die
And when I fall they pick me up and lift me to the sky
Literature
Handle with Care
My heart’s on lockdown
But you’ll always have the key
So handle with care
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Beautiful Illiterature
So it was written
All over her pretty face
Yet I saw nothing
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Critique from PowerfulWriting
I really like this piece. I think a lot of people can relate to this at any stage in their life, as it can be hard sometimes to find companionship or feeling like you are wanted amongst your peers. This kind of poem really tugs at the heart strings, as it is also beautifully written. The italics give it a nice touch and goes nicely with the somewhat delicate tone. I also like the structure of the piece, although it is a bit random I find. But that is just a personal opinion really.
I'd say a great job overall
I really like this piece. I think a lot of people can relate to this at any stage in their life, as it can be hard sometimes to find companionship or feeling like you are wanted amongst your peers. This kind of poem really tugs at the heart strings, as it is also beautifully written. The italics give it a nice touch and goes nicely with the somewhat delicate tone. I also like the structure of the piece, although it is a bit random I find. But that is just a personal opinion really.
I'd say a great job overall