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I’ve been sitting alone for so long

That I’ve forgotten the meaning of "friend"

But just when I started to think I don’t belong

You became a person that I could befriend

But as time passed along, you seemed like more to me

My heart would grow warm, every time we’d speak

But I just don’t know if we could ever be

But I’ll take the first step, to start something unique
Sorry I took so long!
But this is for :iconklepter:
I hope you like it...
So tell me if you did or not :D !
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:iconcodawinx:
Codawinx Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Know the feeling all too well.
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
We've all gone through it.
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:iconbellagbear:
BellaGBear Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
always scary to make someone more than a friend. Love that the character from your poem does have the nerve to do it
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Everyone should have the gumption to do so.
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:iconbellagbear:
BellaGBear Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hm maybe. But it can be such a waste wwhen it does not work out so can not really blame people for being afraid
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well, it's a bigger waste of time to wonder.
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:iconbellagbear:
BellaGBear Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hmm yes guess that is true.  Good friends will survive anything if it goed wrong anyway I like to believe
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It always depends. 
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:iconbellagbear:
BellaGBear Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hm maybe. I was talking about what happenend to me but maybe I was just lucky as well
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I don't know exactly what happened so I can say.
But I don't believe so much in luck.
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Your gorgeous work has been featured here: untamedunwanted.deviantart.com…
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! 
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:iconsupernobodyhome:
supernobodyhome Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome poem.
Are you still accepting ideas for poems?
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Check the journal :D
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:icongale-oneofmany:
Gale-OneOfMany Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Totally get this one. Did the same with my best friend. She's definitely the best thing that ever happened to me.
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That's so nice to read :D
Thank you for relating. 
:iconadoration-plz:
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's a good thing I don't believe on these things.
Sucks that you do....


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:iconathousandyearsofcats:
I did this for fun. I didn't believe this. So get your facts straight before making comments.
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well your fun could cause other people some problems.
Some people actually believe this.

I'd say you are being a bit rude.

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:iconditie:
Ditie Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013
Heart 
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
!:iconshinyheartplz:!
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:iconninja615:
Ninja615 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this is fantastic and very beautiful!
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much!
:iconheehee-plz:
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:iconninja615:
Ninja615 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
no prob!
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:icongodsgal01:
Godsgal01 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student Writer
This is beautiful! =) I really like it. Avatar 2-Jul-'10
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
:iconadoration-plz:
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:icongodsgal01:
Godsgal01 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student Writer
You're welcome! :floating:
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:iconnanathatha:
NanaThatha Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
aw!
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconheehee-plz:
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:iconmaccasmine:
MaccasMine Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my god, this is like me and my friend 'cept we're not romantic..
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
As long as you could relate
To me it seems great!
Thanks!

Unless you meant something else...
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:iconthedoughnuter:
thedoughNUTer Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist
It's like what I'm experiencing. This truly inspires me to take a step forward.
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Then take the step :D 
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:iconbaconmagic:
BaconMagic Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013
This isn't free verse. Other than that, nice poem.
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Agh!
I guess you're right...
Also, thank you.
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:iconthedarksolidsnake:
TheDarkSolidSnake Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student Artist
This says alot to me :) you might like my poems alot if this is what you write.
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Sure!
I'll check 'em out.
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:iconsaberlily29:
saberlily29 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013
so many feels man 
:iconclapplz:
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much!
:iconadoration-plz:
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:iconyo1000:
yo1000 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013
awwwwwww thats nice
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
:iconheehee-plz:
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:iconsteffenc-itsjustme:
SteffenC-itsjustme Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
"That I've forgotten the meaning "friend"  I think it may be missing "of" before "friend"?

Good, positive poem ^^
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I fixed it 'cause you were right!
Thank you!
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:iconsteffenc-itsjustme:
SteffenC-itsjustme Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome ^^
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:iconimaebyjune:
imaebyjune Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I think it's adorable! :D
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much!
:iconblushplz:
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:iconangeliquediabla:
Angeliquediabla Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
I like this..
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well...
Thanks...
:icongrin--plz:
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:iconklepter:
klepter Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You got the exact feelings across, i like it very much. Thanks for this wonderful piece. I'm sure my friend would love this as much as i have. She might understand it as i had hoped you could convey it. And don't worry, ill give you full credit when i show her. You're really talented and with work like this keep it up.
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