You’re all torn out and cold
Even if all you see is darkness
You’re the bit of light that’s shining
And I know you don’t have control
But you can't just let go
Because if one day you do, you might lose yourself
Then I’ll be left alone, with no one to hold.
This poem would sound way better if sung...
Worst thing you could do is to give up; give me your thoughts!
But anyways, watch me if you want more.
Really nice poem. It has a lasting yet sad impact. It still fills me with hope in a way, though.
I love this poem. It brings hope.
Yes, we have to keep fighting no matter what...
your lovely freedom.
I love it!
"Even if all you see is darkness
You’re the bit of light that’s shining"
That really inspired me, and I think that's a very accurate description because even when all you see, all you are in, is darkness, because you haven't given up, because you still try, you still are, you are the light that you are looking for, the light that you wish to see, the light you want to be. I think it also speaks of strength as well, to not give up and to keep trying, to keep doing, to keep living because you are the light that's shining in your darkness.