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Every moment I spend my time with her
I know that she's the only girl I prefer
From being beautiful and sweet
To being animated and carefree

She is bliss to my life
She heartens me everyday
And she's always there when I'm down
She takes my bitterness away

She attained my heart quickly
And change my world entirely
She means so dearly to me
She has my heart completely

I really hope I never lose her
Or despair will fall completely on me
Because she's the only one I want
She's the only one I need
Not so random, random inspiration
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ChristineAnne25 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful as always, dear sir. :iconsophisticatedlaplz:
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well, well, well, thank you my good chap :iconcoolplz:
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ChristineAnne25 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Anytime. I'm looking forward to read more of your breathtakingly amazing poems. :meow:

~ Once a dummy, always a dummy.
:dummy: :heart:
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconblushplz: Thanks !
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ChristineAnne25 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome. :meow:

~ The dummy that loves ~GentlePeace's poems.
:dummy: :heart:
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconhurrdurrplz: Thanks !
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Starkpretty Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012
Non-intentional rhyme!! Fantastic!! I find that if the rhyme just happens, it's not cheesy or laboured, it just works. I don't have that gift, so well done!!

I don't usually read love poems because I find them saccharine, but this was not. It was lovely and sweet and truthful, and whoever she is, she's a lucky girl.

Lovely!!!
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It's truthful because everything I write comes from my heart.
And thank you so much :D !
I hope she reads that comment :D
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Starkpretty Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012
Good! That's what stood out so much to me about your writing- the candour of it.
No problem,I hope she does too. :D
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ObsidianWyng Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist
You get a watch!
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much :D
I will do my best!
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ObsidianWyng Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Hobbyist
Yay!
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missanimestranger Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Aww this is so sweet and from the heart, beautiful.
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Every poem that I make comes from my heart, specially love poems :3

Also thanks !
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missanimestranger Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Your welcome!
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cagc360 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Dam Kev, this is beutiful
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, it's inspiration :D
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RichardKail Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012
I Really like this :)
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
So you think I do well, huh?
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RichardKail Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012
yeah i like your stuff :)
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Frozenice379 Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Student
aww thats so sweet XD
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
aaaw shucks, stop it
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Frozenice379 Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Student
lol keep up the good work! :D
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks :D

spread the word if you like :D
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Frozenice379 Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Student
okay :)
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E404Corruption Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
it is good but i cant tell if you wanted it to rhyme or it just happened
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It just happened's, most of my poems have parts that rhyme and others that don't

But i think the importance is that people can understand the message :D
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E404Corruption Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
it is, i agree with that.
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