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Every moment I spend my time with her
I know that she's the only girl I prefer
From being beautiful and sweet
To being animated and carefree

She is bliss to my life
She heartens me everyday
And she's always there when I'm down
She takes my bitterness away

She attained my heart quickly
And change my world entirely
She means so dearly to me
She has my heart completely

I really hope I never lose her
Or despair will fall completely on me
Because she's the only one I want
She's the only one I need
Not so random, random inspiration
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ChristineAnne25 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful as always, dear sir. :iconsophisticatedlaplz:
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well, well, well, thank you my good chap :iconcoolplz:
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ChristineAnne25 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Anytime. I'm looking forward to read more of your breathtakingly amazing poems. :meow:

~ Once a dummy, always a dummy.
:dummy: :heart:
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconblushplz: Thanks !
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ChristineAnne25 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome. :meow:

~ The dummy that loves ~GentlePeace's poems.
:dummy: :heart:
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconhurrdurrplz: Thanks !
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Starkpretty Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012
Non-intentional rhyme!! Fantastic!! I find that if the rhyme just happens, it's not cheesy or laboured, it just works. I don't have that gift, so well done!!

I don't usually read love poems because I find them saccharine, but this was not. It was lovely and sweet and truthful, and whoever she is, she's a lucky girl.

Lovely!!!
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It's truthful because everything I write comes from my heart.
And thank you so much :D !
I hope she reads that comment :D
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Starkpretty Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012
Good! That's what stood out so much to me about your writing- the candour of it.
No problem,I hope she does too. :D
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ObsidianWyng Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist
You get a watch!
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