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Trust me when I say this, everything will be alright
I’ll be here, to comfort you every moment of your life
Cry on my chest if you like, only if it lets you feel right
Because I will always be here, right by your side

I know some things can be unexpected,
And sometimes the bad can’t be evaded
But I’ll try my best, so you can be able to rest
And I’ll try my best to relieve you from stress

Because I care too much to leave you with pain
It tears my heart to see you like this again
You’ve told me to step back, but it's too sad and tiring
I promise you, this will be the last time you’ll be crying
I wrote a sad poem, so I made this.
That's explains itself...
I dunno, leave a comment?

Also, :iconluvluvplz: you people
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:icongothdra:
gothdra Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013
This brought a tear to my eye. Well done, really, as few things make me cry...
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much!
I'm happy I could touch your heart. 
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:icongothdra:
gothdra Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013
You're welcome Heart 
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:icon5ninjacat:
5NinjaCat Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013
I love this~ <3
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :iconluvluvplz:
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:icon5ninjacat:
5NinjaCat Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013
You're welcome! :D
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:icondkarndezolus:
DkarnDezolus Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is beautiful :)
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
:iconadoration-plz:
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:iconlilfixit:
lilfixit Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I wish my ex would've written something like this to me...It might've proven to me that he cared at least a little.
But I guess then I wouldn't be dating around and I kind of like dating around... haha.
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well, things just flow sometimes :D
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:iconnosephire:
Nosephire Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Lovely indeed...
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks lovely :D !
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:iconknifeinthecrowd:
KnifeInTheCrowd Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
It's cute. I like it. ^_^
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks and I like you :D
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:iconknifeinthecrowd:
KnifeInTheCrowd Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012
I'm liked! :aww:
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hooray!
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:iconadonael:
Adonael Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Comforting last line.
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, I try my best.
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:iconadonael:
Adonael Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No worries.
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:iconmissanimestranger:
missanimestranger Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
OH MY GOD!!!
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
OH MY, YES I KNOW!
Also, what?
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:iconmissanimestranger:
missanimestranger Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
It was awesome!
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :iconlainloveplz:
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:iconmissanimestranger:
missanimestranger Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
OMG LOVE THAT!:iconlainloveplz:
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
YEA, ISN'T GREAT? :iconlainloveplz: :iconlainloveplz::iconlainloveplz:
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:iconmissanimestranger:
missanimestranger Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
It so is!!!
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:icondarvia123:
Darvia123 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I missed a "v" i meant I loVe it... DUH XD
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Don't worry, I understand it :D
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:icondarvia123:
Darvia123 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awww cute. I loe it!
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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:iconevesins:
evesins Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012
very moving :)
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, your words were moving :la:
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:iconmuffeli:
Muffeli Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012
This is soooo beautiful. I just love this poem.
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
*Pats on head*
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:iconmuffeli:
Muffeli Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012
My joy ^^
*Purring*
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:iconarashka:
Arashka Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is adorable! I immediatly visualized it in my mind.
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, lovely!
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:iconarashka:
Arashka Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
my pleasure!
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:iconchristineanne25:
ChristineAnne25 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, how sweet! :iconlainloveplz:
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :iconlainloveplz: !
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:iconchristineanne25:
ChristineAnne25 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You are welcome! :iconbigmeowplz:
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:iconariaxexias:
AriaXexias Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
God, I wish I had this right now.
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You will, one day.
Or when you most need it.
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:iconkuraitenshiv:
KuraiTenshiV Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist
i truly like this poem
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, I truly appreciate the comment :D
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:iconkuraitenshiv:
KuraiTenshiV Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist
anytime
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:iconanthonylino:
anthonylino Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Awesome. .
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you,
And so are you ಠ_ಠ
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:iconinkpumpkin:
inkpumpkin Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awesome
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