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I don’t know if you feel it too, the feeling of wanting to break loose
And just screaming “I love you” but I’m scared that we might lose
Because just of our age, or the time, or any person that doesn’t want you to be mine
But I know that if this goes wrong I’d be the one who'd cause the crime

I’m a bit afraid; one false move would make everything go away
And I’m always left wondering if what I’m doing is okay
I just want everything to be alright between you and me
Or is there something that I cannot see?

My head is rambling with questions that fear is inventing
Maybe is not fear, maybe it’s because I’m too caring
Am I paranoid? I don’t want to make a mistake
You said I’m doing things right, then why do I always shake?
Isn't this a bit personal? Yea, I think it is.
Though, few people could relate to the "I DUNNO WHAT I'M DOING, IS THIS RIGHT!?" thing.
Have you gone through something similar?
Thank you for reading! I'd like to know your opinion
(This isn't romantic, is it :iconsadfaceplz:)


And always remember, I :iconluvluvplz: you people.
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DragonFireSoul Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
omg...somebody get me some tissues...
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
*hands a tissue*
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:icondragonfiresoul:
DragonFireSoul Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks :3
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:iconkk-crossing:
KK-Crossing Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
;n; this is my entire life right here~
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Darn...
Want to talk about it?
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KK-Crossing Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I'm alright, bby<3 thank you for offering, I might take you up on it in notes sometime uwu
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Sure!
I'll be waiting.
:iconadoration-plz:
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GingerHeart222 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This. This describes my entire life. I love it 
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Kind of sucky though D:
But thank you!
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FoxStar-EternalFlame Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Student General Artist
I'm touched ;^;
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