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I don’t know if you feel it too, the feeling of wanting to break loose
And just screaming “I love you” but I’m scared that we might lose
Because just of our age, or the time, or any person that doesn’t want you to be mine
But I know that if this goes wrong I’d be the one who'd cause the crime

I’m a bit afraid; one false move would make everything go away
And I’m always left wondering if what I’m doing is okay
I just want everything to be alright between you and me
Or is there something that I cannot see?

My head is rambling with questions that fear is inventing
Maybe is not fear, maybe it’s because I’m too caring
Am I paranoid? I don’t want to make a mistake
You said I’m doing things right, then why do I always shake?
:icongentlepeace:
Isn't this a bit personal? Yea, I think it is.
Though, few people could relate to the "I DUNNO WHAT I'M DOING, IS THIS RIGHT!?" thing.
Have you gone through something similar?
Thank you for reading! I'd like to know your opinion
(This isn't romantic, is it :iconsadfaceplz:)


And always remember, I :iconluvluvplz: you people.
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~FoxStar-EternalFlame May 4, 2013  Student General Artist
I'm touched ;^;
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~GentlePeace May 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, thank you very much.
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:iconrobbybot:
definitely can relate to this, really wish i did not but sadly nothing i can do no matter how much i want to.
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:icongentlepeace:
~GentlePeace Apr 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Keep your head up.
You can't be sad forever.
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~GentlePeace Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Again thank you!
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:iconimrandomartist:
umm yeah I can relate to the IDK WTF I'm doing and stuff, though can't really relate to the wanting to tell someone you love them, usually I'm holding back just tackling someone and beating them up or screaming "FUCK OFF YOU ARE GODDAMED ANNOYING!" ...so...yeah... though I like how you worded what you feel ^^
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~GentlePeace Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks... I guess?
Anger is bad...
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:iconimrandomartist:
I ramble too much :S, long conversation short, I like how you worded it, like the idea and concept, though I haven't experience it so can't relate that well.
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