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I know it happened once, but it left me scarred

I won't give up, but I'm still afraid

But I will be brave, I just hope it won't happen again

Because I'm not sure I'll be able to handle the pain

It feels like all I can do is hope, for the best days.
Not sure what to say about this piece.
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half-pixieman Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Student Writer
You're not alone with this feeling, beautifully put together
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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artistic-heart13 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Sometimes, all you can do is hope. Love how this sounds unsure at the beginning, then sounds more confident in the end.
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
And very true.
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artistic-heart13 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome.
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badaipurba Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hope everything is OK.
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Of course it is! :D
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SeaLover143 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You captured my current situation exactly. This is a great piece and I love it! I feel like I can really connect with a lot of your work. You are very talented.
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much for such kind words.
I try to connect to people most of the time :D
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MadxRhapsodyx17 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Student Writer
Sometimes hope is the strongest element that a person can have.

This is a lovely piece. Never give up. :hug:
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Never give up!
:icongrin--plz:
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MadxRhapsodyx17 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Student Writer
Never surrender! :iconsupertighthugplz:
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Never will :iconbrohugplz: !
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MadxRhapsodyx17 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Student Writer
:huggle: :heart:
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eclaire291 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I agree! This piece has such honestly and emotion in it. I can feel the despair of the narrator throughout the piece and then that little bit of hope comes shining through. Great work!
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hope helps people push through.
Thank you very much.
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MadxRhapsodyx17 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Student Writer
I'm inclined to agree, ~eclaire291. :highfive:
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