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What if I kiss you?
What if I pull you close?
And whisper you the truth
Will you say “I love you”?

Because you shine light into this dark room
I wish I could turn the whole world to slow-mo
Just so I could see this beautiful flower bloom
Maybe then you’d see how much you mean to me

I go on my days with my heartfelt thoughts
Warmth is what you’ve brought into my feather heart
And all of this just feels like the start
I know that one day, we will never be set apart
Love, love, and more love.
I've been thinking about a kiss for a while now, but more than before O_O
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:iconruggedcatcast:
RuggedCatCast Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Student General Artist
Oh.
My.
Word.



This is beautiful, I have to read this to my partner.
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Do it!
:D
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:iconzumborocks:
zumborocks Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013   Writer
A poem that I can so relate to Love it!
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconadoration-plz:
I'm happy I could match your feelings :D
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:icondarvia123:
Darvia123 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahaha you and me both.... you me both.
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hmm, what does that mean?
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:icondarvia123:
Darvia123 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It means I'm thinking about a kiss too, more than usual. Nevermind, doesn't matter.
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well, only if you say so.
And I guess we think alike :D
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:icondarvia123:
Darvia123 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I told you this would be a wonderful friendship, didnt I?
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I guess you were right :D

:iconpancakeplz:
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:icondarvia123:
Darvia123 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Pancakes? That was weird. When I spelt out pancakes the first time, i spelled it like this: p-a-n-k-a-k-e-s......
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I want some, I haven't eaten some in years ;-;

I ate :iconwafflesplz: once, but pancakes are way better.

What do you think?
Pancakes aren't weird!
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AngelofDarkness001 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Student Interface Designer
Awww sweet love :heart: simply beautiful I gotta admit it shows what love describe each one, even for the person who is writing it :clap:
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you, you're too sweet :la:
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:iconangelofdarkness001:
AngelofDarkness001 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Student Interface Designer
Your very welcome,:aww: I get that a lot I can't help it :happybounce:
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:iconsaphirepz:
SaphirePZ Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is so sweet ^^
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, and you're sweet :D
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:iconsaphirepz:
SaphirePZ Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
haha thanks
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missanimestranger Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
again beautiful!!!
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :la: !
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:iconmissanimestranger:
missanimestranger Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
no prob
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:iconwaiting-for-wings:
waiting-for-wings Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
aww that was sweet. its nice to see a genuine love poem on DA lol
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, my sweet friend.
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blacksoul4321 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012
I love this. It's so good.
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
You're too good.
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:iconblacksoul4321:
blacksoul4321 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012
I try.
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
And you succeed.
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blacksoul4321 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012
:iconhappy-plz:
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Al3xDk Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012
Eheheh, this is so sweet! Dun worry, same here.. Why do i think so much about one, sweet kiss? ;_;
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Maybe, because that sweet kiss might be the start?

Thanks :D !
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:iconal3xdk:
Al3xDk Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012
Eheheheheh xD
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:iconmrcoolorange:
MrCoolOrange Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I like how you understand all the stuff i do. Lol its like im talking to myself. Its quite scary actually :iconscaredplz:
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Who said that you might not be doing that?
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:iconmrcoolorange:
MrCoolOrange Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
wait what?
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I dunno :iconwinkfaceplz:
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:iconmrcoolorange:
MrCoolOrange Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
OH YOU SMARTY :iconretardfaceplz:
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:iconhiyor:
hiyor Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
aw thats so sweet love it!
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks and you are sweet :la: !
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:iconhiyor:
hiyor Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you I'm such a softy >,//
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aren't we all :D
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:iconhiyor:
hiyor Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
(late reply)
yeah i geuss some of us are like that >//>
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Doesn't matter if it's late, as long as you reply :D
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:iconhiyor:
hiyor Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yep I guess so !
I will keep that in mind
^^
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shinon125 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012
It may sound a bit strange, but what caught my interest was that you said you were, "thinking about a kiss for a while now.." Is this a first kiss that you're thinking about, or just kissing someone you really like? :c
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm just thinking about a kiss that I want to give.

Why the :c ?
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:iconshinon125:
shinon125 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012
To me it sounded like a strange question :P I wasn't trying to sound weird or anything! I'm sure that the moment you think this kiss out and have no more second thoughts about it, it'll be very fulfilling. :)
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Nah, I think about it a lot XD
And don't worry, that wasn't a weird question :la:
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DoctorHorrible-8D Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012
aww so cute <3
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