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What if I kiss you?
What if I pull you close?
And whisper you the truth
Will you say “I love you”?

Because you shine light into this dark room
I wish I could turn the whole world to slow-mo
Just so I could see this beautiful flower bloom
Maybe then you’d see how much you mean to me

I go on my days with my heartfelt thoughts
Warmth is what you’ve brought into my feather heart
And all of this just feels like the start
I know that one day, we will never be set apart
Love, love, and more love.
I've been thinking about a kiss for a while now, but more than before O_O
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:iconruggedcatcast:
RuggedCatCast Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh.
My.
Word.



This is beautiful, I have to read this to my partner.
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:iconzumborocks:
zumborocks Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013   Writer
A poem that I can so relate to Love it!
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconadoration-plz:
I'm happy I could match your feelings :D
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Darvia123 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahaha you and me both.... you me both.
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hmm, what does that mean?
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:icondarvia123:
Darvia123 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It means I'm thinking about a kiss too, more than usual. Nevermind, doesn't matter.
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well, only if you say so.
And I guess we think alike :D
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:icondarvia123:
Darvia123 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I told you this would be a wonderful friendship, didnt I?
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I guess you were right :D

:iconpancakeplz:
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:icondarvia123:
Darvia123 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Pancakes? That was weird. When I spelt out pancakes the first time, i spelled it like this: p-a-n-k-a-k-e-s......
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