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People are confessing, some already dating
Hearing so much “I love you”, it’s driving someone crazy
So let’s exchange hatred with love and just get along
And celebrate the day by listening to a corny song

Singles shouldn’t cry or start weeping inside
Just wait for the one, even if it takes a long time
Couples show your love, but explicitly has always been grime
Nimble kisses and a hug, anything else will be when you reside

Just remember to show care to the one who’s fair
It’s Valentine’s Day after all, and I’m sure you’re aware
That the “special someone” is waiting for you prepared
To go outside so this wonderful holiday can be shared
Welp!
Here's the V.Day poem and I kinda feel good about it. Not that much though.
Watch and stuff... Shame.
Also, how do you think it flows?
Stay safe people :iconluvluvplz:
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ValaSedai Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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ChristineAnne25 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Simply amazing. :meow:
Can I request a forbidden love poem of some sort? :la: Probably Romeo and Juliet-themed? :heart:
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Romeo and Juliet's love was forbidden?... Oh wait, Yea... I think it was... I barely remember it XD
I could write that once I'm done with 3 other poems I promised XD

And thank you!
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waiting-for-wings Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
simple. lovely.
i really like reading your poems :)
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much : D
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Adonael Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Quirky rhyme and flow. It read happily :)

But reading love poems around Valentine's Day always makes me squirm a little.
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Sorry I stuck to the meta (I think you people call?).
But I wanted to do it D:
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Adonael Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That's right and if that's the case then who am I to argue?? ^^;
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconchickenplz:
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Adonael Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:tux:
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