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People are confessing, some already dating
Hearing so much “I love you”, it’s driving someone crazy
So let’s exchange hatred with love and just get along
And celebrate the day by listening to a corny song

Singles shouldn’t cry or start weeping inside
Just wait for the one, even if it takes a long time
Couples show your love, but explicitly has always been grime
Nimble kisses and a hug, anything else will be when you reside

Just remember to show care to the one who’s fair
It’s Valentine’s Day after all, and I’m sure you’re aware
That the “special someone” is waiting for you prepared
To go outside so this wonderful holiday can be shared
Welp!
Here's the V.Day poem and I kinda feel good about it. Not that much though.
Watch and stuff... Shame.
Also, how do you think it flows?
Stay safe people :iconluvluvplz:
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ValaSedai Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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ChristineAnne25 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Simply amazing. :meow:
Can I request a forbidden love poem of some sort? :la: Probably Romeo and Juliet-themed? :heart:
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Romeo and Juliet's love was forbidden?... Oh wait, Yea... I think it was... I barely remember it XD
I could write that once I'm done with 3 other poems I promised XD

And thank you!
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:iconwaiting-for-wings:
waiting-for-wings Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
simple. lovely.
i really like reading your poems :)
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much : D
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:iconadonael:
Adonael Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Quirky rhyme and flow. It read happily :)

But reading love poems around Valentine's Day always makes me squirm a little.
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Sorry I stuck to the meta (I think you people call?).
But I wanted to do it D:
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:iconadonael:
Adonael Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That's right and if that's the case then who am I to argue?? ^^;
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconchickenplz:
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:iconadonael:
Adonael Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:tux:
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hey... Hey... Hey...

Linux do that!!!!
(let us not)
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:iconadonael:
Adonael Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
One animal for another!
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I don't get it...
But did you!?
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Blue-Disciple Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013
Wow. This is amazing! You are amazing!
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You are also amazing :squee:
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Blue-Disciple Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013
:D
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:iconpandorasmusicalbox:
PandorasMusicalBox Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Nice and lovely poem, even if I bitterly hate the holdiay.
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Love not war >_<!
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:iconpandorasmusicalbox:
PandorasMusicalBox Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Indeed :iconadoration-plz:
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:iconzumborocks:
zumborocks Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013   Writer
nice peom
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you good sir.
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:icontopec:
topec Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Where's the hatred and anger? Do you forget, singles don't just cry, we tend to despise the holiday as well.
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Despise... You just answered it yourself.
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:icontopec:
topec Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
... I feel stupid, I don't understand your answer ...
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Look for the definition of despise.
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:icontopec:
topec Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
If you don't want to answer the question that's fine but don't tell me to look up a word I already understand.
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm just saying that despising a holiday is almost the same.
Which is why I say we should all get along.
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:iconember-24:
Ember-24 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I love this, its perfect, love how you described it!
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much!
I try my best.
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:iconember-24:
Ember-24 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
It's amazing! :hug:
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:iconmuffeli:
Muffeli Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013
Ah I like this much :3
Happy Valentine's day~
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
Happy V.D wiggly line!
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:iconnamesrundry:
namesRUNdry Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So much truth.
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Just trying to be honest :3
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:iconnamesrundry:
namesRUNdry Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconthumbsupplz:
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Diablicka Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Pretty poem ^ ^
I really like it :3

Happy V .Day :3 !
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much :D
Happy V.D!
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Diablicka Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
=^.^=
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Hayabusaoffaith Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for this. :heart:
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for the comment good sir.
:iconadoration-plz:
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Hayabusaoffaith Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome!! :hug:
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