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The year has reached the end, and I’m reminiscing the time that I spent
From the dreadfulness I bared, to the happiness that I shared
It’s all in the past, but I’ll never forget all the many times people cared
And the future seems better to me; there could be no reason to be discontent

It’s unbelievable and unpredictable, how much I changed that year
I could barely understand myself and now I know my biggest fear
I’ve managed many of my problems; I’d say none is left near
And many reasons keep me going, which many I hold dear

As for my resolutions, I hold few, the lesser I’ve let loose
I’ll accept all my faults; it’s made my situations obtuse  
Then my mind will be calm, and I’ll make what’s paramount true
I know this will be a great year; it will be amazing thanks to you
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This was made for a group contest on Deviantart, sadly, I didn't submit this poem in time. Did not notice the difference in time zones. So, why not just submit it as a normal none poem contest thing, thing.

On a side note: this poem used to go on another direction... I switched it at last second.

Also, the "you" refers to many people. It's not a you, but a yous?

That's it, stay safe. I wrote too much in this description.
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^ValaSedai 4 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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~GentlePeace 4 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much!
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~chancerox Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is beautiful. new years are always a time i'm grateful for. it's not often we get a fresh start. you're a talented writer :)
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~GentlePeace Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much for the appreciation. :iconadoration-plz:
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~waiting-for-wings Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this is really good - positive - i like it!
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~GentlePeace Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much.
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~Suphyx Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Its nice to see positive poems. This is very nice.
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~GentlePeace Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
You're nice.
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~Suphyx Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I try to be. lol
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Mood: Joy ~MadxRhapsodyx17 Feb 1, 2013  Student Writer
A lovely reflective free verse poem. I really enjoyed it. Thank you for submitting it. :)
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