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Do me a favor; don’t forget the time that we spent
It won’t last forever; I’m sure that one day we’ll meet again

Because we’re truly not far apart, it might as well be the start
And I know it seems a bit rough, just remember to not lose your heart

Because I’ll keep my faith in you, as long as you stay true
And don’t lose your faith in me, your friends barely know me

So don’t you ever worry, because one day we’ll start our story
Filling the blanks that we left open, keeping us from feeling lonely
I wanted a drawing for this and I appreciate the people who offered, but I decided to just not do so.

I still want one... But, you know, stuff.

I wrote this because of my favorite song "Hey there Delilah".

People relate~!

I'm aware of Favor and Promise... Pointing is out.
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:iconmissanimestranger:
missanimestranger Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Oh I didn't you decided not to in the end!
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah...
You kind of took about... A month or so...
So...
Yeah...

I hope this is awkward. 
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:iconmissanimestranger:
missanimestranger Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Well sorry...:(
I did apologise before but you said you were okay. You should have said something.
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That's because I am okay with it.
But I thought you wouldn't draw it XD 

Next times I'll trust you more :D
And no worries!
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missanimestranger Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Ah don't worry  I should have done it quicker, if it ever happens again I'll tell you earlier on if it'll take me a while!
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No worries :D
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missanimestranger Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
okay :D
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tulf42 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Now this I like. If I ever get an on-going series of graphic novels going, I would know where to use this. I've got to remember this in years to come!
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I have to be honest, I do not understand your comment :XD:.
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tulf42 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm saying that whilst I was reading this, it reminded me of an idea I had for a comic. If this poem was my own, I would know which scene in the comic to use it.
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ah, well, glad I can help.
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ValaSedai Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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:heart:
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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waiting-for-wings Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely! I love that song too! :D
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :D !
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AnnaMarie2013 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Student General Artist
This is a sweet poem. :) While it seems to be talking about a relationship, it reminds me of me and my friend. We've known each other since first grade and we just graduated this weekend. She's moving away and I'm staying here in town for a few years.

If you ever decide you want that drawing, just note me if you're interested. I wouldn't mind doing it. :D
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad you could relate!

I'll keep that in mind, though, I think I'll leave it this way.
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AnnaMarie2013 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013  Student General Artist
Okay, no problem. :)
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echoscall Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Student Artist
It resonates!
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:icongrin--plz:
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DkarnDezolus Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is beautiful I love it. :) <3
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much <3
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DkarnDezolus Featured By Owner May 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome. :)
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BeccaCollis Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this. It's amazing :heart:
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :iconshinyheartplz:
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BeccaCollis Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Anytime! :D
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eclaire291 Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks for sharing this lovely poem!
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank for sharing nice words!
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DenmarkKittenKiss Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Student Artist
Really nice writen... ^^
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks you ^_^
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Iam-Dreamfire Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
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Muffeli Featured By Owner May 26, 2013
Wonderful! This is once again really beautiful poem. I think that this is my favourite poem~
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconohstopitplz: Thank you.
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Muffeli Featured By Owner May 28, 2013
My pleasure :3
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DarlingDetermination Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ah. plain white t's....<3
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Love that song from them !
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DarlingDetermination Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ah yes. Its beautiful.
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Shaun-shau Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Another beautiful piece GP :heart:
So sweet and meaningful!
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :iconheart-plz:
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Shaun-shau Featured By Owner May 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No prob! :iconaawplz:
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