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Lately I've been thinking, if the steps
That I've taken were meaningful at all

I'm not sure if my conscience helps me anymore
Maybe faith is guiding me through this storm

My heart feels like it's being torn
By the one who I've cared about the most
Maybe too short, but I don't want to describe this too much.
I know it could'v been better.

If anything, tell me if quality is dropping.

Relate!
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Voluge Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014
No step, no matter how short and irrelevant it may seem, it's not in vain. Conscious both clears things up while also clouding one's sight. If your heart is someone else's and it's being thorn apart, make it beat more clearly so your intent is seen. A thorn heart, gets weaker as time passes by, if nothing is done, you should reconsider who's the owner of it.

If anything, I believe that your test is full of both doubt and hesitation, I haven't read any of your other texts, so I can't tell more than that~
Thanks for giving me a lil bit to read ^^
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you?
No idea what comes before that.
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Vainamoinenian Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
If it wasn't so short maybe fewer people could relate to it this much :) So I say it's a good thing that it's short.
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Short is better I guess :D
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Vainamoinenian Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:) depends on the work actually, but here, yes, short is better)))
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The-Elvenqueen Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
it's not too short at all, it's lovely. And I can relate to it :I
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Glad to hear :D
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PrincessKatydid Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Relatability isn't dropping a smidge! This is exactly how I feel right now.
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That's good!
But that's bad...
Push through.
:iconadoration-plz:
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PrincessKatydid Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Sometimes I don't know what's keeping me going in this "relationship." Sometimes I wonder why I haven't moved on already. And sometimes I just complain on the internet. ;)
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