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I know that you remember all of those bitter moments
But what is it worth for to keep those memories working
They’re not making you happy; they’re just making you hopeless
Then follows depression from the feelings that you’ve let lurking

Because you went through it, but you relive it every moment
When it’s all in your mind and you’re making it a necessary component
It’s just jarring to your heart, yet you keep it for your mind is uncertain  
Many broken hearts, from family to friends, something you won’t admit was certain

I’ve been like you, for months to years, having a mind that’s unclear
And so I’ve shed so many tears, all which came from fear
Though it could be hard to move along, no one ever said you cannot
So please, don’t give up, I believe in you, even if you do not
So, drawing made by :iconanimemaniac19:
But yea, remember to forget the bad.
Also, remember that talking always help, no matter the situation.
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theLightWalker Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This could be a really great rap, or spoken word or something. amazing rhythm. I love your poetry, less is definately more.
GentlePeace Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
True on the length, as long as the meaning gets to you.

Also, every poem that I write is a song in my head.
theLightWalker Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You should pick up a guitar and write music to go to some of them. Itd be amazing.
GentlePeace Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That's why I want to learn how to play guitar.
Or at least get one and teach myself...

One year I'll learn how to, eventually.
theLightWalker Jul 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Its not too hard, I recommend just taking like a month of lessons, just to learn all the frets and notes and scales and chords, then just teach yourself online. Thats how I did it.
GentlePeace Jul 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm thinking of learning how to play guitar in a year or so.
Would be nice if earlier.

But I will learn... Eventually.
Thanks for the advice.
XIStormIX Mar 7, 2013   Digital Artist
Just beautiful!!!!!!!!!!
GentlePeace Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
ChristineAnne25 Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I needed this. A lot. :hug:
Your poems always make me happy. :)
GentlePeace Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm here for people :iconadoration-plz:
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