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Lend me your sweet lips
Give me a soft kiss
Stay with me till the end
Let's stop playing pretend

Don't let my heart break
Let's learn from our mistakes
I'll let your love embrace
Mend me with your lovely grace

They never leave my mind
Your cherry colored lips
The roses that I have picked
And the sweetness that one day I'll kiss
Yea... Well, you can figure this one out.

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GentlePeace Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much :D
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Danny1210 Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Nice flow :) Sweet message
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GentlePeace Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks and you're sweet :D
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Danny1210 Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
thou art welcome
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supernobodyhome Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Very sweet poem.
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GentlePeace Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, you're too sweet :D
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supernobodyhome Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Your welcome :)
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Tayla19 Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
so beautiful =) love it <3
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