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Lend me your sweet lips
Give me a soft kiss
Stay with me till the end
Let's stop playing pretend

Don't let my heart break
Let's learn from our mistakes
I'll let your love embrace
Mend me with your lovely grace

They never leave my mind
Your cherry colored lips
The roses that I have picked
And the sweetness that one day I'll kiss
Yea... Well, you can figure this one out.

What do you think?
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Erozja Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much :D
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Erozja Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013
:aww:
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Danny1210 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Nice flow :) Sweet message
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks and you're sweet :D
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Danny1210 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
thou art welcome
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supernobodyhome Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Very sweet poem.
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, you're too sweet :D
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supernobodyhome Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Your welcome :)
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Tayla19 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
so beautiful =) love it <3
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks a lot.
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Tayla19 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
=D
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lilelle Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
<3 beautiful
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You are also beautiful :D
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lilelle Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012
thank you :)
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The-Lost-Hope Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Student General Artist
A very sweet poem. Words are arranged nicely, and I like how you explain a bit without over doing it. :)
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I did try for simplicity, thank you :D
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The-Lost-Hope Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Student General Artist
Well you nailed it and you're welcome :D
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pranav03 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
Nailed It!! :D
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yea :D !!
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Gogo-Ipi Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
all this is so lovely :)
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, my lovely friend :D
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AliceCrimsonAnarchy Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Student General Artist
I think that's beautiful :iconyesyoucanplz:
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, and you, are also beautiful :D
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AliceCrimsonAnarchy Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Student General Artist
awe thank you :iconiloveitmoreplz:
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funquisha Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
a little cliche... but it's really sweet <3
:)
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, that's sweet :la:
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funquisha Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
haha anytime
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DarkOliver Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012   Traditional Artist
Its well typed, but forgive me for asking, is there that special someone in your life?
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, I do need my inspiration :D
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DarkOliver Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012   Traditional Artist
Such a special word.
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
With a special definition, to me.
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DarkOliver Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012   Traditional Artist
Indeed.
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TheNinjaInYourCloset Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful! I love how the words are arranged. I don't think my lips are very kissable though so there's no way this could ever apply to me. :XD:
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Never say never!
You'll know in the future :D
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TheNinjaInYourCloset Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Maybe. :)
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm positive :la: !
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TheNinjaInYourCloset Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Hopefully you're positive enough for both of us. :lol:
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Only if you are positive with me!
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TheNinjaInYourCloset Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I kind of gave up a long time ago about being positive about this particular subject.
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm not sure of your situation or how you truly feel, but I am confident and completely sure that I will achieve what I want with patience :la:


And if you are sure about what you feel, be positive :la:
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ImRandomArtist Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
god I got corrupted, when you said that I instantly thought of J.B.....btw people who say never say never actually say never :P
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Or do I ever? :D

No clue what I meant by that :la:
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ImRandomArtist Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
lols when do you ever? :P
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
When do I never?
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ImRandomArtist Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012
?
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I... I really don't know.
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burnedloverose Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Student General Artist
this is really great! love it!
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad you did :D
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