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You are re-creating the word love for me
I have never felt anything in my heart so deep
I'm so in love that I'll never be the same
I just want to be with you every single day

You have touched my heart in many different ways
And now from my heart you'll never go away
I feel so warm every time you're here,
I feel so cold whenever you disappear

Though it feels like you are already mine
Who knows if that's real, who know if it's a lie?
I just think about you every single time
Every time I write, and when I close my eyes

But I'm just waiting for that special day
For when you finally say, yes
I poem I made with the idea of a simple love poem.

"How she fills me with joy"

Obvious why I wrote this, but anyways, what do you think?
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:iconcourtneycatastophe:
CourtneyCatastophe Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is gorgeous, may I steal it? I have a feeling I'll be stealing many of yours. The only thing I will be using it in (or at least the idea) would be a letter to my boyfriend. If thats okay?
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Of course it's fine!
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blacksoul4321 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012
I love it. Could I post it on my journal? You would get full credit. I just need someone to read it.
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Of course you can!

Give me a link to your journal to see it though :3
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blacksoul4321 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012
Thanks
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supersakurapunch2 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
Really nice
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Many thanks.
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Eternal-Poet Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
I love love poems. >v<
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Most of my poems are about love :D !

Heck! I would say all :la:

:la: <--- love that thing!
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:iconeternal-poet:
Eternal-Poet Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahahahaha. ME TOO! :la:
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missanimestranger Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Again, a beautiful peom, you never fail to impress us!!!
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aw shucks, stop it :la:
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:iconmissanimestranger:
missanimestranger Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
ITS TRUE!!!
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:iconmakilotus:
MakiLotus Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful! Just simply beautiful! ;3 I'm sure they'd love it!
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you,
And it's a she, not "they" :D
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:iconmakilotus:
MakiLotus Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I wasn't sure what your gender was or your preference, so... XD But yeah, she would love it!
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
XD Yea she would.
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:iconinfinitelove143:
infinitelove143 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
he/she/it/they/I/you/...pancakes.

Randomness XD
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Don't worry, it's okay.
As long as you don't forget the syrup.
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infinitelove143 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It's fine I love being random!

Oh and powered sugar! ...I mean powdered sugar... now powered haha... damn I can't talk! Don't forget the powdered sugar! hahaha XD
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I won't forget, unless you forget the powered sugar!
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infinitelove143 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
XD
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silentshadowdrawer Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like this i want to one day feel for someone the way these words express love. i never like to read so it is a compliment when i say i really enjoyed reading ur work. oh n ivlove adventure time and regular show to there my all time faves
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
They're amazing cartoons, only a few are good now.
And one day you'll feel love
that not even words could ever express,
I just always try to get close enough to picturing it.

And thank you so much :D
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silentshadowdrawer Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah most cartoons r really stupid now i really like invader zim they should make more now it would be realllly popular now.
i do hope i can feel that way one day guy have done so many mean things to me.
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
If Invader Zim comes back again,
it won't be in a kids channel for being too dark,
which it is, but it's so awesome!

One day you will feel true love, and with the one you do, you'll marry.
I believe in the "There's someone for you in this world, you just have to find him/her" thing :D
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silentshadowdrawer Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
True true n thats the hardest part cause love is so pure when u find it but it makes i feel so much pain until u do maybe thats the point is to hurt and then when u find it it makes it stronger a stronger bond astronger love.
yeah true it would be but still gir is soooo cool n funny they have to bring him back
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Only thing I can say about love is, you will feel it, and you will feel great :D
Agreed!
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silentshadowdrawer Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol. i wanted to ask u to ur id pic is that suppose to be lumpy space princess?
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Nope, is a cloud, for me it shows classy cause of the hat, and gentle and peace because it's a cloud :D

But Adventure Time is amazing! :squee:
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TheMADGrimReaper Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconhmplz: Nicely done and it made my heart warm up x3
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
I'm happy to hear that I made you to feel something.
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TheMADGrimReaper Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No problem dear!
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:iconbibiter:
bibiter Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
I think it is pretty
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
And I think you are pretty :D
Thank you!
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infinitelove143 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yes... very nicely done! ...you should send this to your future/current partner. :)
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, I kinda already did... She's not me partner though.
But with patience, good things will come! :D
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infinitelove143 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Patience is key. :)

But do talk to her... lightly... casually... and see where it goes. I mean someone needs to start, right?
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I've started,
Now is the patience game

She does read my poems :D
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infinitelove143 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hehe cool :)

That's a plus
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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:iconinfinitelove143:
infinitelove143 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Good luck bro!
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :D
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OnlyYourPuppet Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012
Beautiful, good job ^
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much.
^_^
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