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You are re-creating the word love for me
I have never felt anything in my heart so deep
I'm so in love that I'll never be the same
I just want to be with you every single day

You have touched my heart in many different ways
And now from my heart you'll never go away
I feel so warm every time you're here,
I feel so cold whenever you disappear

Though it feels like you are already mine
Who knows if that's real, who know if it's a lie?
I just think about you every single time
Every time I write, and when I close my eyes

But I'm just waiting for that special day
For when you finally say, yes
I poem I made with the idea of a simple love poem.

"How she fills me with joy"

Obvious why I wrote this, but anyways, what do you think?
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CourtneyCatastophe Featured By Owner 1 day ago  New member Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is gorgeous, may I steal it? I have a feeling I'll be stealing many of yours. The only thing I will be using it in (or at least the idea) would be a letter to my boyfriend. If thats okay?
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner 15 hours ago  Hobbyist Writer
Of course it's fine!
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blacksoul4321 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012
I love it. Could I post it on my journal? You would get full credit. I just need someone to read it.
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Of course you can!

Give me a link to your journal to see it though :3
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blacksoul4321 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012
Thanks
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supersakurapunch2 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
Really nice
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Many thanks.
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Eternal-Poet Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
I love love poems. >v<
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Most of my poems are about love :D !

Heck! I would say all :la:

:la: <--- love that thing!
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Eternal-Poet Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahahahaha. ME TOO! :la:
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