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We react with sadness
In the time of darkness

So it’s okay to cry
Because life can be rough at times

From that you will learn
So you won’t be hurt anymore

Every moment has a reason
You’ll get something in return
If anyone has idea for me to write, tell me.
Go another one coming.


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DayLightenedDark Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Amazing work. I found it to be true; we become sad from the hard times in life, but we can grow stronger from them. It's very possible. Those last two lines were interesting, in a good way. They give me more hope towards the moments in life. It's like saying "everything happens for a reason", but adding that there's good to that. Really nice. :)
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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DayLightenedDark Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome. :)
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CrazyKidAndrea Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful :love: 
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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Muffeli Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013
Once again beautiful poem. And it' true what you write. I can't do nothing, but like this.
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, and that is something.
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Muffeli Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
My pleasure, since you let us enjoy of your poems ^^
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
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Muffeli Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013
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