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I look out the window and see the liquid drops
I hear the soothing sounds that calms my thoughts
It helps my feather heart to keep its strength
As long I keep my conscious clear my faith won’t go away

Because these are the days when I wonder the most
About my life choices and all I ever hope
The rain keeps my sanity from being overthrown
By anything troublesome and keep a peaceful tone
I know it's a tad short, but, I hope it's good enough. Very simple though.
I wish it had a drawing, if anyone would be so kind, note me.

Rainy days... What do you think?
Leave a comment if you like and thank you for reading this. :iconluvluvplz:
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:icongamepwn:
gamepwn Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013
I can relate to this very much. I often find myself wondering the same thing, asking myself if everything is worth it. Rainy days and nights clear my head for some reason.
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ProsperV Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're right, very simple, but equally moving. There is such a truth in this.
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :D
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ValaSedai Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This work has been featured in
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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zumborocks Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013   Writer
It's so pretty!
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much :)
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ChristineAnne25 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This was a very well-written poem, and I really love your choice of words. :iconiloveitmoreplz:
I personally hate it when it's raining in the day, but at the night ... :iconcannotevenplz: In Dubai, where I used to live, it barely ever rained!
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I like or maybe even love the rain.
I remember few months ago I walked to my house while it was raining, but I mean heavy raining. But it was nice.

And thank you!
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ChristineAnne25 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome! :hug:
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:iconsparia:
Sparia Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Student General Artist
i like it!
well done :)
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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:iconsparia:
Sparia Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Student General Artist
you are welcome!
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starnoyume Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013
Rainy days bring a sober mind, but when it rains ceaselessly, it would be awful...
and I prefer it rain at night, just sounds like a lullaby...
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Always better at night :D
And only bad if it turns in to a storm!
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Darvia123 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow very serene poem. Short, but very well done!! And a photo would look nice with this poem.
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I know!
But I need to get one first.
Thank you!
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:icondarvia123:
Darvia123 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome! And good luck on the photo :D
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Ember-24 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Oh wow! Yes I love it when it rains especially at night and this describes it perfectly! :iconluvluvplz:
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's always better at night, helps to sleep :D
Thank you!
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:iconember-24:
Ember-24 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Yes it does and you're very welcome :huggle:
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burnedloverose Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Student General Artist
<3 I approve
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
<3 Thanks and cool name.
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burnedloverose Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Student General Artist
um yeah, no prob and thanks
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Shaun-shau Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
How do you do it:iconclapplz:
it's beautful and not to sad to the point it's depressing and just lovely :iconlovelyhugplz:
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconbrohugplz: Thank you very much!
You always have to try.
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Shaun-shau Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes! :iconepictackleglompplz:
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
How do you found those?!
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Shaun-shau Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oh i asked someone how to do it and that is the example she used!!!
it"s my absolut favorite one:heart:
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
There has to be somewhere in DA that has those things...
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:iconshaun-shau:
Shaun-shau Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah i've been meaning to hunt it down...hehe...
some people have accounts JUST for icons....interesting...
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:iconmuffeli:
Muffeli Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013
Everything doesn’t need to be long to be good. Simple and short works too. This is nice poem, once again.
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you lovely.
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:iconmuffeli:
Muffeli Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013
No problem. And sometimes less is more :D
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Quality over quantity!
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:iconmuffeli:
Muffeli Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013
Yes :3
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Arctic-Web Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013
Nice :)
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks : )
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