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I look out the window and see the liquid drops
I hear the soothing sounds that calms my thoughts
It helps my feather heart to keep its strength
As long I keep my conscious clear my faith won’t go away

Because these are the days when I wonder the most
About my life choices and all I ever hope
The rain keeps my sanity from being overthrown
By anything troublesome and keep a peaceful tone
I know it's a tad short, but, I hope it's good enough. Very simple though.
I wish it had a drawing, if anyone would be so kind, note me.

Rainy days... What do you think?
Leave a comment if you like and thank you for reading this. :iconluvluvplz:
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gamepwn Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013
I can relate to this very much. I often find myself wondering the same thing, asking myself if everything is worth it. Rainy days and nights clear my head for some reason.
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ProsperV Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're right, very simple, but equally moving. There is such a truth in this.
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :D
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ValaSedai Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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zumborocks Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013   Writer
It's so pretty!
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much :)
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ChristineAnne25 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This was a very well-written poem, and I really love your choice of words. :iconiloveitmoreplz:
I personally hate it when it's raining in the day, but at the night ... :iconcannotevenplz: In Dubai, where I used to live, it barely ever rained!
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I like or maybe even love the rain.
I remember few months ago I walked to my house while it was raining, but I mean heavy raining. But it was nice.

And thank you!
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ChristineAnne25 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome! :hug:
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