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You’re not alone, even if you feel such sorrow
Please try to calm your mind and forget about tomorrow
I know that life can hurt, but from my happiness you can borrow
Please don't cry anymore, I will help you with the troublesome morrow  

Even if the bad seem to be everywhere you go
Just keep in mind that you have to stay away from what’s below
And I know that you’ll learn from these bad experiences
So then you can help those who are inexperienced

Please don’t be sad, everyone has a reason for his or her existence
You can’t ever give up, push through and have resistance
The worst thing you could do is to lose all of your hope
Just promise me that you will try to never mope
Decided to write this because of things that I've heard these past days.
Including a watcher whom I won't mention... Mainly because I don't remember who it was and it was such a long time ago.

But be sure to comment, I would appreciate any ones opinion.
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Awsatayo Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I just want to thank you for taking the time to write a beautiful poem like this. I've read it so many times and i cry from relief every time, because this is so inspiring. It gives me hope that maybe tomorrow won't be so bad. I was going through a hard time last year and I read and reread this and while I'm not fine right now, your poem just helped so much. And I wanted to say thank you.
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner 6 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad I could help.
If you need someone you can message me.
I know how you feel, I have anxiety problem,
Soo I tell you what
Always look for help.
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MaidenStar Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconcongratssignplz: Your work has been featured here: [link] :iconfeaturesplz:
If for any reason you would like this to be removed from my list, please let me know via :note:. Thank you! :heart:

=MaidenStar
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much.
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NemoNameless Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, I know why God made me. To suffer. Thanks.
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Don't you dare blame god -_-
Do you think that'll help you?
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NemoNameless Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Not much left to do at this point.
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
So, you're in the point of giving up?
Why do you think you would feel bad?
Also, you will never have a reason to blame god. Ever.
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noorelven Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013
aww thats so sweet :D
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :meow:
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noorelven Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013
Welcome :D
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waiting-for-wings Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
aww that was so sweet
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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dadof3demons Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013
Very nice. Sounds like the conversation i try to have with myself each morning. wish i could listen to myself.
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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supernobodyhome Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Reminds me about when I was really depressed. The only thing that kept me hanging on for a while was a little shred of hope.
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well, never lose hope :D
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:iconbemari:
Bemari Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
Well written poem with message in it.
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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blacksoul4321 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013
:iconblushplz: IT'S SO AMAZING!
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :iconcblushplz:
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blacksoul4321 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013
No problem :iconbrohoofplz:
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greywolfwarrior Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this poem is so beautiful and I needed to hear this so thank you.
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I wrote this because I care about people, like you.
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greywolfwarrior Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you.
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Darvia123 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:') thank you...
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No problem, here for everyone.
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Muffeli Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
That is just so beautiful poem once again. I really like this one~
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.:iconblushplz:
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:iconmuffeli:
Muffeli Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
You'r welcome~
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Littlelinguist Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Student Writer
Motivating! Great work! :)
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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Littlelinguist Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student Writer
You are most welcome. :)
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starnoyume Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
It's just what I have to repeat to myself everytime I feel desperate.
Thanks for writing this!!!
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for appreciating this.
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ChristineAnne25 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's cool that I just needed to hear it right now, and then suddenly you post it up! :tighthug:
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
For the people!
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Flykick-Chick Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
This is absolutely the most beautiful, touching poem I have ever read <3
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :iconblushplz:
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Ieitmotif Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
I love you <3 XD
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love you as well XD
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RedReception Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
A message that has touched many, including myself.
Well thought and a good poem with substance!
I doff my hat to you sir.
Stay awesome.
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Why, thank you :iconfancyplz:
And you should also, stay awesome.
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PandorasMusicalBox Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. I needed to hear this. Thank you so much.
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm here for you.
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PandorasMusicalBox Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :hug:
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theheek Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
its very inspiring its something i need to hear right now thank u
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm here for anyone and everyone.
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theheek Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
ok iam disabled broke and my dad cant find a job were getting evicted cause we cant pay the rent have no money and noone to ask for help we have no family and even the small amount we do have are not helping so iam lost torn the stress is eating me alive i dont know what to do
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Calm mind, have faith, and pray.
Those are the little things that help the most.
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