Ever since you told me how you felt
The pain and misery that you’ve held
Everything that you’re going through
I’ve done nothing else but to help
But every time I listen to you
I can’t help but to feel the same
My morals detain me for leaving you
But I wouldn’t be the only one to blame
This is amazing! I love it.
This is perfect
It's scary how close this relates to my own situation with my friend. Amazingly relatable. One little thing; on the fourth and sixth lines, not sure if you need the"to" before "help" and "feel." Maybe it's just me...In any case, great job as usual.
I see what you mean.
Though, if I remove it in the last line, it would've been weird.
And thank you!
Wow this is awesome, I feel the exact same way with a friend of mine!
I liked this and you did excellent again.
You hit the nail right on the head. I even teared up a little bit because of it's beauty in truth. Thank you so much!
It was actually perfectly times because in between the request and your poem, I thought that I had fixed things with her, but then yesterday she dragged it up again and your poem helped me feel better!
I really like this poem a lot. I can really relate with it.