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Ever since you told me how you felt

The pain and misery that you’ve held

Everything that you’re going through

I’ve done nothing else but to help

But every time I listen to you

I can’t help but to feel the same

My morals detain me for leaving you

But I wouldn’t be the only one to blame
From a long line of request, that I asked for.

First of is for :iconprincesskatydid:.
Hope you liked it and I hope I did not disappoint.
I really... Really hope not.
But hey! Be honest and such.
I honestly don't know if I hit the topic right :-:
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Anninhaxox Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013
Magnificent! :) 
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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Godsgal01 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student Writer
This is amazing! I love it. =D
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much!
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Pukachi Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013
This is perfect :heart:
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! 
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Pukachi Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013
You're very welcome :hug:
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artistic-heart13 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's scary how close this relates to my own situation with my friend. Amazingly relatable. One little thing; on the fourth and sixth lines, not sure if you need the"to" before "help" and "feel." Maybe it's just me...In any case, great job as usual.
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I see what you mean.
Though, if I remove it in the last line, it would've been weird.

And thank you!
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artistic-heart13 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome.
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