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I can feel the rubble beneath my feet
My eyes are clouded with a fog that restricts me from seeing
For now I feel blind, but from a distance I see a shining figure
Though I seem to be in a malevolent environment, I don’t feel like fleeing

With each step I take, the rubble pierces my feet
Though the pain is sorrowful, faith strengthens my heart
I know I won’t be disappointed with finding someone who shines in the dark
All of this will be worth it; this will be where my happiness starts
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This awesome drawing made by :icondavegomes:.

So... Tell me what you think and or feel about this poem!
Have a nice day or night.
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~GentlePeace Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, I guess OWO
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~Ember-24 Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I love the way this poem makes me feel. It reminds me of the hope I have! :)
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~GentlePeace Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm trying to relate to peoples feelings and such :D
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~Ember-24 Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
:hug:
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~Y-O-D-H Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
The world we live in is dark confused pain. Rare, or deluded, are those who find light in the darkness.
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~GentlePeace Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
The people who found light are the people who had faith and never gave up.
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~PrincessKatydid Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the good wishes as it is in fact night to me right now! But that aside, I continue to marvel at how your poetry seems to reflect my life. I'm trying to focus on that shining person at the end of the road, even though the road right now is difficult to walk. Thank you! <3
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~GentlePeace Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I guess we all go through the same problems.
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~thatnerdyowl56 Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hoo boy, that hit home. *shiver*

...Anywho, wonderful, brilliant work! :squee:
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