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I’ve felt this way since we first met

My heart pounded fast and I couldn’t behave

My hands were always shaking and my words wouldn’t come out the same

I removed all that’s dreaded to change my old ways

But time has passed now, and everything has changed

The love I once felt might no longer be awake

But I know deep inside that things remain unchanged

Because I might forget your face but the good moments will never go away
I need to hurry up with these poems :s
Sorry that I take to long to post 'em.

So! This poem was inspire by a song called "Where we land" by Ed Sheeran.
Also, this one has spaces; what do you think? Fancy, right?

So yea... Check my other stuff and watch if you like them...
Here is a heart :iconluvluvplz:
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:iconlilmisspeppy:
LilMissPeppy Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Rose tint my world keep me safe from my trouble and pain. Sorry, it just had to be said.
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No worries, say what you feel!

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waiting-for-wings Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
sweet
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
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noorelven Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013
COOL!!
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconadoration-plz:
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noorelven Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013
:D :glomp:
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Adonael Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Splendid poem. I couldn't agree more with it :)
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
Trying to relate and such :D
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Adonael Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No worries!
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Pickled-Poppy Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Student Writer
A lovely, pithy piece. x
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much.
:iconadoration-plz:
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theolivethief14 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Found this on the front page >w< Awesome job!
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
It's nice that it made it there; great day :D
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theolivethief14 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome ^-^ Cute icon :3
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much.
:iconadoration-plz:
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theolivethief14 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure :la:~:heart:
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bazkaybee Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist
Ugh I can't get over how perfect this is, can't wait to read more of your work <3
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
And there is more to come :D
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chancerox Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
beautiful and obviously heartfelt. you are talented :)
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much :iconblushplz:
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xPyschoKillerx Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013
I am in love with this poem! <3
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for showing some love <3!
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MidnightsBloom Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Student General Artist
Very nice.
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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Muffeli Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013
It's simple, it's beautiful, it's nice and I like it :3
And just take your time to write~
Because this was worth the wait. And I'm sure that your other poems are that too ;3
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :iconcblushplz: !

But I remember reading that I need to be constant to get more watchers, the more watchers I got the more people I can relate to and the more I have to relate too the more I can make happy!
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Muffeli Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013
But remember that you don't have to do miracles to make others happy. And also don't take too much stress okay? :aww:
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm trying my best.
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Muffeli Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013
Good :D
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