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I’ve felt this way since we first met

My heart pounded fast and I couldn’t behave

My hands were always shaking and my words wouldn’t come out the same

I removed all that’s dreaded to change my old ways

But time has passed now, and everything has changed

The love I once felt might no longer be awake

But I know deep inside that things remain unchanged

Because I might forget your face but the good moments will never go away
I need to hurry up with these poems :s
Sorry that I take to long to post 'em.

So! This poem was inspire by a song called "Where we land" by Ed Sheeran.
Also, this one has spaces; what do you think? Fancy, right?

So yea... Check my other stuff and watch if you like them...
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LilMissPeppy Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Rose tint my world keep me safe from my trouble and pain. Sorry, it just had to be said.
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No worries, say what you feel!

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waiting-for-wings Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
sweet
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
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noorelven Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013
COOL!!
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconadoration-plz:
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noorelven Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013
:D :glomp:
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Adonael Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Splendid poem. I couldn't agree more with it :)
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
Trying to relate and such :D
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Adonael Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No worries!
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