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With this broken heart I'll keep moving on

And the scar you left me will help me become strong

For my heart used to be so numb, but then you showed me love

Sadly then you shattered it, once you saw I held you dear

But I hope you don't regret what you have done

For what I felt, you'll only receive it once
Sadly... Another sad poem.
I promise this will be the last one, for now at least.

Next one will be happier!
Or something.

Please, if you liked this, check my other work.
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
Broken hearts need a long time to heal. But they allow us to learn a lot about ourselves, the world and life in general.
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Cheers to that.
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013
Hehe!
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tsadiah Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013
Ha ha I didn't make me sad. I took it as his loss...and slamming the door...
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noorelven Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013
hear hear a heart it breaks it shatters and shall never be the same !
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missanimestranger Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Aww this was so sad! I hope this isn't from experience!
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ah... Well...
Yes and no.
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DarlingDetermination Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I always find sad poetry the easiest to make, most likely because it is one emotion we all are familiar with.
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's true.
And the hardest to write is happy things.
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fantasylover103 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:clap:
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