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With this broken heart I'll keep moving on

And the scar you left me will help me become strong

For my heart used to be so numb, but then you showed me love

Sadly then you shattered it, once you saw I held you dear

But I hope you don't regret what you have done

For what I felt, you'll only receive it once
Sadly... Another sad poem.
I promise this will be the last one, for now at least.

Next one will be happier!
Or something.

Please, if you liked this, check my other work.
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Broken hearts need a long time to heal. But they allow us to learn a lot about ourselves, the world and life in general.
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Cheers to that.
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Hehe!
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:icontsadiah:
tsadiah Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013
Ha ha I didn't make me sad. I took it as his loss...and slamming the door...
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noorelven Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013
hear hear a heart it breaks it shatters and shall never be the same !
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:iconmissanimestranger:
missanimestranger Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Aww this was so sad! I hope this isn't from experience!
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ah... Well...
Yes and no.
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:icondarlingdetermination:
DarlingDetermination Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I always find sad poetry the easiest to make, most likely because it is one emotion we all are familiar with.
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's true.
And the hardest to write is happy things.
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fantasylover103 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:clap:
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconadoration-plz:
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:icondaylighteneddark:
DayLightenedDark Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This was great! I really liked the meaning in it. It did have sad tones in it, but sad poems are fine. As long as you write what you want, it's all good. :D
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
I just don't like writing sad because it might make people sad.
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DayLightenedDark Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're problem.
I don't think that will happen. I think people will just be able to relate and (possibly?) not sad in a bad way. Sorry, I don't know if I make sense. >_<
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No worries, it did make sense.
And you are right :)
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DayLightenedDark Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh gosh, I meant to write "no problem" in my last message, but I guess I was thinking of "you're welcome" and ended up typing "You're problem." Sorry. I'm sorry if I offended you!
Ok! Just keep writing poems, even sad ones if you want. Personally, for me, I don't feel sad in a bad way by reading them.
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You didn't, no worries.
Yeah... I'll just write.
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:icondaylighteneddark:
DayLightenedDark Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ok! :D Just write.
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Rain-Sapphire Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, really liked this. Sad but beautiful
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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:iconamen-no-suomynona:
amen-no-suomynona Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Don't make promises. Just write. :3
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I just don't like writing sad things Xl

But I know what you mean :icongrin--plz:
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:iconamen-no-suomynona:
amen-no-suomynona Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconyuihugplz: yay! You'll keep writing!
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:iconmuffeli:
Muffeli Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
All poems don't have to be happy to be good~
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I know, but I don't like writing sad poems Xl
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:iconmuffeli:
Muffeli Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
And I like your sad poems x'3
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :XD:
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:iconmuffeli:
Muffeli Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013
No problem~
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:iconsupernobodyhome:
supernobodyhome Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I know that feeling man.
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Sucks that you do.
And all you can do is go through it.
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:iconsupernobodyhome:
supernobodyhome Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well everyone has deal with it eventually.
It helps a lot to distract yourself.
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