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We lost an amazing woman this week
A beautiful angel that was taken back to heaven
And from our eyes we shed our tears, for a woman we hold dear
That we will never forget, because in our heart she’ll always stay

A great woman who is proud of her son
That from heaven she yells “That’s my one”
The one she will always watch over and protect from the dark
Because she is sweet, kind, and always full of love

So please do not fear the obstacles that you’ll take
You have people who care for you and your mothers embrace
She will hold you tight and from heaven she’ll say
“I love you so much and with you forever I’ll stay”
A guy lost his mother a few days ago.
I made him this poem;
And I hope other people that have lost their mothers can relate to this.
This is for you guys.
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gottalovepokemon Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Student
awww this is soooo sad, it made me cry, it reminded me of my dads. all I have is my mother and I would be sooo sad and misrable if she went away :'(
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Then it's great that she's there for you :D
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gottalovepokemon Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Student
yup! I loved that poem!
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ChristineAnne25 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is ... beautiful ... I hope he felt better when you showed it to him. You really are fab at poetry. :heart: :hug: It made me cry too, though, but ... :saddummy:
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:saddummy: Thank you, I dunno how he felt, I just know that he read it. Thank you.
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ChristineAnne25 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well, I'm sure he felt at least a teensiest bit better. Anyone can by just reading your poems. :3

~ The dummy that you'll always know.
:dummy: :heart:
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Let's hope so :iconnewlaplz:
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arualcat Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
I think every persone that has loved and lost someone understands the meaning of this beautiful poem.
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, and this was for them.
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arualcat Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
I see. It's good to remember those loved ones that have passed away.
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Agreed.
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SaphirePZ Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wonderful poem. A little sad but very beautiful
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
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missanimestranger Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
...
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
....
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waiting-for-wings Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug:
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'll be sure to send him your condolences.
Thank you.
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waiting-for-wings Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
please do :hug:
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tmduran94 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is very beautiful piece. Please give my condolences to the young man who has lost his mother.
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I will.
Thank you.
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MrCoolOrange Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
So sad... :( Your really great at poetry. Wish i was as great... I made one for my friend.. I failed horribly.. no rhymes.. (Sighs) just wanted to get my point out to her..
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You don't need to rhyme to make a good poem, just express yourself right and send a message. Practice makes perfect, I'm still practicing ;_;

And I'm sure he/she loved it.
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MrCoolOrange Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I hope she did. But yeah really keep up the good work! (:
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I will !
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Glaceon7890 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
So sad
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Everlasting90 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
So beautiful!!! I hope he loved it!
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'll show it to him this Monday, Thank you.
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kristinaelyse Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:tears: :happycry:
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burnedloverose Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Student General Artist
:cries:
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DogTierJade Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:icondragonweep:
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blacksoul4321 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012
:iconcry--plz:
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