Shop Mobile More Submit  Join Login
She only leaves at night, but she did not want this life
And no one knows that, every night she cries
Under sheets of her bed, regretting all she has ever done
And that her only good friend is her hidden knife

Mistakes when she was young will her hunt now
Because all she did was drugs and guys from the crowd
And all her so called friends have left her down
All she needed was love, why would you make her frown?  

Because every boy she laid with, only fed her lies
She thought that it was love, so she would always try
She could’v used someone, but you people left her alone
Now she’s walking on the streets, because she’s used to being shown
I made this poem because I've heard "The A Team" by Ed Sheeran so many times!
Such a good song and such an awesome singer O_O
Add a Comment:
 
:iconnoorelven:
noorelven Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
deep!
Reply
:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
Reply
:iconnoorelven:
noorelven Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013
Welcome :D
Reply
:iconchristineanne25:
ChristineAnne25 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is wonderful, just like any other of your poems. :meow: Wonderfully written. :hug:
Reply
:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :huggle:
Reply
:iconchristineanne25:
ChristineAnne25 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome. :3
Reply
:iconarbarac:
Arbarac Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012
A terrific poem about a wonderful song. A true testament that to spark emotion a poem doesn’t need to be long.
Reply
:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much wonderful person :la:

And it is an awesome song :D !
Reply
:iconlissythepoet:
LissyThePoet Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, I can absolutely relate to soem of this poem. Nicely written I love it. :)
Reply
:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, lovely :happybounce:
Reply
:iconlissythepoet:
LissyThePoet Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome :)
Reply
:iconlissythepoet:
LissyThePoet Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
**Some
Reply
:iconkuraitenshiv:
KuraiTenshiV Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist
this is a very very good poem, thank you so very much for sharing this
Reply
:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for sharing this nice comment with me :happybounce:
Reply
:icontwotooto:
twotooto Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Student General Artist
Nicely written, but you left an e out of the word could've on the second to last line :)
Reply
:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I know, but Deviantart leaves a red line under it if I write it... It just bothers me too much!

Also, thanks :D
Reply
:iconnigmasin:
NigmaSin Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
We need more Women Rights
Reply
:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yea, they need more respect, I'm sick of somethings.
Reply
:iconmuffeli:
Muffeli Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012
So sad, but still so great.
Reply
:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you !
Reply
:iconmuffeli:
Muffeli Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012
My pleasure.
Reply
Add a Comment:
 
×

:icongentlepeace: More from GentlePeace


Featured in Collections

Literature by SavageFrog

Writings by SecretPoet17


More from DeviantArt



Details

Submitted on
November 30, 2012
File Size
843 bytes
Link
Thumb

Stats

Views
576
Favourites
31 (who?)
Comments
21
×