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This cryptic feeling that I’m feeling inside

I don’t know its meaning but it has caught my eyes

I’ve only felt it once, but it’s been made very clear

That since the first time I met you I’ve hold you dear

And it’s so vivid; it’s strange but also great

It’s close to unexplainable, and gentle as a dove

But only few, barely anyone could relate

That the best of her is that she showed me love
It's for this contest [link]
by :iconlive-love-write:

The theme was "The best of you".
Hope you people liked it.

And I was never that good with titles :icongrin--plz:
I also noticed I haven't written romance in a while <: o
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ProsperV Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Good lord, I can relate to this shockingly well. It reminds me of one of my closest friends. It's so apparently striking. I love this!
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much.
I try my best to relate to people.
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waiting-for-wings Featured By Owner May 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Heeeey congrats on getting third place!! :D
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :D
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waiting-for-wings Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:giggle: see? I knew you could do it!
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:icongrin--plz:
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waiting-for-wings Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconmoesmileplz:
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waiting-for-wings Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yay! you wrote it :D
see, it was good! :D
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I dunno...
Hopefully I'll get to something :s
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waiting-for-wings Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
good luck :)
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