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I miss you because I hold you so dearly
You're mostly in my mind, but not because I worry
But because I miss the gentle voice that inspired my poems
The playful personality that cheered me up every moment

Your adorable ways, that would always warm my heart
How beautiful you are that you'd break the fourth wall
Your difference between girls, being real, not a thought
My heart was sad until here, you were brought

Because every time I go to sleep
I wish that you were here, laying down next to me
Hopefully, you feel the same
Because without you, I just can't stay sane
I miss you ;_;
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Bookmouse Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012
Beautiful, mostly how I feel...except about a boy. All of your work is fantastic. Just sayin'.
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! You're fantastic... Just saying :D
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Tinkerbellluv Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012
i know how you feel.
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yea... But hey,
Love gives you patience.
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Tinkerbellluv Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012
very true.
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CemeBlack Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012
this is so :sad: i love the emotion and feeling you put in this well done
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hope it wasn't too sad
Thanks :D
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CemeBlack Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012
No not too sad but quiet interesting how feelings can be told in a poem right lol! i enjoy writing poems it's about the only way to get all your feelings out as is writing if you are angry you write a torture scene that scares even you lol.
it's a great pleasure.
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animemaniac19 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012
Great Poem Kev :)
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Who knew you read my stuff.

By the way, YOU STILL HAVE MY FREKEN DS
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animemaniac19 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012
hehe ^^; well, its in good condition .3.; ill give it to you at school.
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You said that before school ended O _ O
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animemaniac19 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012
I'm not trust-worthy with objects am i? ^^;;;
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Not at all, but if you want, I can sell it to you
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animemaniac19 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012
Meh, idk, (late reply ><;) so watcha been up to?
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Writing and such, nothing much, you?

by the way, ds for only 75$... just saying
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ImRandomArtist Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012
... why is it sad? its good and about love and is sweet, but why is it sad? its not liek she rejected him in thsi poem or anything, its liek saying you are my world, how is that sad?
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
different interpretation?
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ImRandomArtist Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012
shrugs, could be..... and how do i manga to spell like wrong so many time when i speed type?... weird... i wanna do something about missing someone!
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missanimestranger Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
So sad and romantic
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
In a good way, right!?!?!?
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missanimestranger Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Yeah!
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ok then, yay!
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missanimestranger Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
:D
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Eternal-Poet Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so sad. XD
I'm a hopeless romantic. And I'm tearing up.
AWWWW I LOVE IT. :heart:
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missanimestranger Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I a hopeless romantic too, and im tearing up power duo!
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Eternal-Poet Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awhhh... POWER DUO, YES!
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missanimestranger Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Yeah baby!
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Eternal-Poet Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahaha!
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missanimestranger Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
:D
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm happy that you liked it :D
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Eternal-Poet Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahaha yesss!
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