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Let’s take it slow, if you want us to grow
Our love is our gentle abode, and I just want you to know
That my patience is unknown, but for you, I will hold
I’ll just have to flow, and always remain with hope

Because much time has already passed
And a lot has happened, so sudden and fast
But with each moment, we get closer and forget the past
With each mistake, we start growing, with each, we understand

But now that patience is a big part of my life
I hope that one day, you'll also be mine  
It could take a while, it could also be soon
But none of that really matters, because I truly belong to you
Well, isn't :iconlove--plz: beautiful?
You better say yes... Because it is!
But,
Yeah,
Remember to leave your thoughts :happybounce:

Peace and stay lovely :la: !
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:iconjjulie98:
jjulie98 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013
Wow...just wow.  My best guy friend and I are going through almost the exact same thing.   Your poems are amazing!  God gave you a beautiful talent and I hope you continue to write!  
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconblushplz:
Thank you so much!
And that's nice to hear :meow:.
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:iconjjulie98:
jjulie98 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013
You're welcome!  :D  
And thanks! 
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:iconviikable:
viikable Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Dat feel tho...
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's something alright. 
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ValaSedai Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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:heart:
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much :iconluvluvplz: !
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:iconrobbybot:
robbybot Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013
amazing poem i love it
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconcblushplz: Thanks!
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:iconnemonameless:
NemoNameless Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Very nice. Please visit my page and remind my forgetful brain that youre there tomorrow so I can be reminded to look at the rest of your gallery then. (On dialup :P)
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Will do.
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:iconsecretpoet17:
SecretPoet17 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012
I really like this piece a lot. :heart:
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks you, lovely. :D
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:icondarvia123:
Darvia123 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so wonderful! Its awesome.
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, you're also wonderful !
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:iconmarudeth:
Marudeth Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
I don't usually like poetry...but this describes exactly what I am going through. Reading this made me feel better somehow...
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I aim for spreading happiness :happybounce:
I'm glad I could make you feel better.
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:iconmarudeth:
Marudeth Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
Thank you. Keep up the good work :)
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:iconwindswirl:
WindSwirl Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I say it's beautiful.
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I say sir, thank you so much :iconfancy-plz:
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:iconwindswirl:
WindSwirl Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
My pleasure, sir.
:iconlikeasirplz:
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:iconbringcastle:
bringcastle Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
Wow, that`s shoot!
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconpewpewplz: Right?
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:iconbringcastle:
bringcastle Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
Damn.
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hey, what does a fish say when he was swimming and hits a wall?
Dam.
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:iconbringcastle:
bringcastle Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
Ha, ha, very good.
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:iconknifeinthecrowd:
KnifeInTheCrowd Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
I love the first paragraph. It really speaks to me.
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I speak to you :iconcreepyplz:
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ChristineAnne25 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is just too sweet and adorable! Never in my life have I ever met someone who writes poetry, well, for the love of their life. This is perfect for a love song!~ :heart:
:iconchocolatecookieplz: Cookie for ya!
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NemoNameless Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Not to intrude madame, but I write love poetry for someone very special to me as well. Would you like to see my gallery? Check the 'for lily marie' gallery too! (A little less clutter there :) ) :)

Thanks!!!!! Sorry for interrupting! :D
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:iconchristineanne25:
ChristineAnne25 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well, I won't mind checking out another person writing love poetry! I'm sure it would be delightful! :meow: I checked it out, and I must say that I was wide amazed by the amount of poetry in the folder. :heart:

Well, I should get to reading. These look very interesting and heart warming indeed. :dummy:
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NemoNameless Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, please give me as much feedback as you can! :XD: I don't get a ton of visitors, and not many leave comments lately!

Yes, I hope you enjoy them very much, as much as you can enjoy sad romantic poems without being sad yourself... :la:
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ChristineAnne25 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I must if ever I have time! :salute:

I already find your poems enjoyable! :dummy:
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:iconnemonameless:
NemoNameless Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome, thanks!

Really? That's great! I'm so glad! :D

Which ones do you like best, and why?
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GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love cookies :iconhappy-plz: !
Thank you, and you're sweet :la: !
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ChristineAnne25 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Everyone loves cookies!~ :iconmonkeyloveplz:
You're welcome, and if you want sweet, read this poem. This poem is sweet. :heart:
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconblushplz:
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BleedTheDream180 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
this is so sweet, and some of the rhymes work really well
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, my good sir :iconfancyplz:
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:iconnintendo-nerd-ftw:
nintendo-nerd-ftw Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
great job i really like it, reminds me of a poem i wrote myself
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, good memories, right?
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:iconrainb0wdashie:
Rainb0wDashie Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Professional Writer
Oh gag me with a fucking spoon.
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I gag you not!
And I will take that as a compliment :iconlarollplz: !
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denisekaylee Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is incredibly adorable! I love it!
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, you're lovely :la: !
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:iconwillowshades:
WillowShades Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
This is very well writen!
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
:iconthankyouplz:
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:iconpastwriter:
Pastwriter Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
this is great, very nice.
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:icongentlepeace:
GentlePeace Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, you're too nice :D
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:iconpastwriter:
Pastwriter Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
its no problem at all.
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